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Sapphire
New Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 1


0 posted 1999-08-17 05:35 PM


THE ANSWER

Say goodbye to all the pain
which you can no longer endure
Say hello to new feelings
and try to heal from the past
It is time to realize when hope has failed
and there is no more trying
You could have had so much together
If only...he would change
IF ONLY...you could stay the same
so he will still need you
Well, that's not the answer.
Say goodbye!

© Copyright 1999 Sapphire - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-08-17 05:47 PM


Welcome to the forums, Sapphire

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PS: have you been to "The Alley" lately and cast your vote for "on a roll"? :D

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-17 07:08 PM


I like the thought here! Welcome! Especially the end. So true.
startin_fresh
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137
US
3 posted 1999-08-17 11:19 PM


Saphire:

Welcome! I too am new but find people here are very constructive with their comments. I am sure you will like it here as I do.
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P.S. I told ya it would be well received.:-)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-04-18 04:31 AM


just what I needed!
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