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In Reveries"
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In Reveries" |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap 
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In reveries I touch your lips With shy And gentle fingertips, All trembling as They feel your kiss. With such Exquisite tenderness And love, explore Each last detail: The warm Caress of your exhale, The sensuous curve Of blush, below The soft Mustache that tickles so. So real -- these dreams Replete with you -- I would My lips could have them too! This was written for a man I love very deeply ... you know who you are. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
This is lovely. Anticipating your future submissions. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I like this one too. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Divine. So soft and rhythmic. Im looking out for more. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Someone once told me that the best poetry comes from the heart ... this one did ... thank you for your compliments, they are appreciated. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I love the "shy and gentle fingertips" Lovely, tender writing. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done !  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nachtdraco, a delightful poem. Big TU |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is excellent!!! Your message is lovely....and your meter and rhyme scheme is flawless (not to mention creative) Very nice indeed...... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree with Nan. It's flawless. He'd better know who he is! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Thank you all so much ... yes, Balladeer, he does know who he is ... and Seymour ... what does TU mean..? ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written. Excellent form, rhyme and rythym!!!! This is what a poem should be!! |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Sitting here, wistfully wishing this had been written for me, I have decided that,of your works you've posted todate, this is my favorite. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This then is truly a work of art, my friend. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Really sensuous and well done ma'am....I liked it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet |
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