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LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 1999-08-17 08:23 AM

When she gets out of the bath,
And uses her powder puff,
The soft scent of the dusting
Is never quite enough
To slake the thirst that rises
Through my hungry soul
As I think of us together,
When the two of us are whole.

The towel slides along her thigh,
As she polishes each sweet curve
With an innocence that sinks into
My every cell and nerve.
Her breasts sway in time to
Every movement to and fro
As she bends to her task,
Then wraps her towel to go.

I wonder if you women know
When you take your bath
We men really are quite helpless,
When you do the simplest tasks.
There are so many moments,
When we need to hold you tight,
But sometimes you are so beautiful
We stand muted in your sight.

Lorelei54
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

1 posted 1999-08-17 08:25 AM

written by LJA last summer...and posted by me today, his wife...I wanted to show his serious side while Toe was showing his..LOL

One of my favorites!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 1999-08-17 08:30 AM

But....but..Lorelei?....What does it do to you when LongJohn takes a bath?...You know?.....That once a week Saturday nite thing? LOL....When he slowly slides that towel down his one good leg....puts his peg leg back on ever so slowly and gently...then, takes his dentures out of the glass and re-installs them....maticulously replaces that patch over his eye....????????

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-08-17 08:35 AM

This is a beautiful poem.......

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 1999-08-17 08:39 AM

Dreamie One

Thanks for your well-timed compliment - Toerag is just jealous...

Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

5 posted 1999-08-17 08:40 AM

Toe..grrrrr....when LJA takes a bath, its my pleasure to join him...and his "peg" leg does not bother me at all...LOL...you two guys think alike..never serious! and making me late for work cause I want to play!

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 1999-08-17 08:52 AM

I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do so again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do so again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do it again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do it again..........(today)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 1999-08-17 09:17 AM

Toerag: Thank goodness you put that (today) on the end of your promise!!! LOL. I think LJA would miss your teasing as much as I'd miss the show! *G*

LJA: I loved this poem when I first read it... love it still! Great job!

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 1999-08-17 11:27 AM

Belle

I've said it before, I'll say it again. God made this world to be a picture frame for his most beautiful creation - Woman. It never ceases to amaze me how wonderful women are - just looking at a woman gives me serenity and joy. All of you wonderful women out there.... thank you for being feminine.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 1999-08-17 01:00 PM

Good stuff, LJA....

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 1999-08-17 10:14 PM

Great poem, Long John. Great sentiment and a fantastic closing thought. Talent to spare......

pen of passion
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since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

11 posted 1999-08-17 10:18 PM

I melted.

Carolina Girl
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since 1999-08-14

Posts 63

12 posted 1999-08-17 10:19 PM

LJA....You go boyfriend!!! Lorelei, what else does he have hiding from us? I've never seen the serious side of him...Course, I haven't seen his funny side, either! ROFLMAO!!!

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

13 posted 1999-08-17 10:26 PM

Wow!.. Lots of bathtub stories going around lately.. (hehe ) I like it!

I need to try one.!

Thank for a lovely poem.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

14 posted 1999-08-18 12:21 PM

Well now that explains it all.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2004-04-18 04:31 AM

yeah, we know

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

16 posted 2011-02-20 02:47 AM

This is beautiful.

A

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