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Open Poetry #1

Tears of life

MEGAN
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 17
Cottonwood, Ca United States

0 posted 1999-08-17 02:47 AM

Just like a down pour,
my tears just fall.
Confusion overwhelms my soul.
Am I strong enough to go on?
Each morning I wake up,
wanting so much to know,
but I am left in the dark.
Alone and confused,
I cry.
Not just a single tear,
but rather a waterfall.
Swimming in my own emotions,
I begin to sink.
Soon grasping for air,
I don't struggle to be free.
I just fall,
hit bottom.
Overtaken by life,
not wanting to get up,
I lay on the water's floor.
I take my last glance at the world,
say my final prayer,
take my last and final breath..

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-17 07:41 AM

This one has despair written into every line. Good poem, hope you don't feel this way too often! We all have 'down' time though so I can relate.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-17 08:04 AM

Lots of emotion! I too hope you are feeling better. It is good that you can get the feelings out in your writing. That helps!
Hope things look up real soon!

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