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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Don't know how I could come up with the courage to post something so lame..Well, I was in a good mood today & thought I'd concoct something silly...!!! Pl comment (looks like I need the admonition to get more serious..) My Online Friend… I met this cool, witty guy on line For lack of a better adjective,I call him 'divine' No, not a saint, just a normal guy Who, in real life, could be very shy… Still a stranger -A friend? No, not yet But I swear he is someone so full of zest… We met on a board..not through some clan But I don’t believe it was some 'master plan' Its late, I am blue & I click on my mouse Behold, he is there, mad at his spouse..! We rant, we rave, take crap off our chests When we feel better, aah, time for some rest We chat, we yap, we laugh, we troop We don’t say goodbyes when heads start to droop He's classy, he's zesty, he's level-headed too I think, from him, I could learn a thing or two.. I won't be surprised if he disappears 'morrow And I don’t think it will fill me with sorrow I think --I'd keep him, for good or for now; If he's gone 'morrow-I'd smile & take a bow…!! ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within." Amelia E. Barr [This message has been edited by moonmoon (edited 08-18-99).] |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Lame? I don't find that so. I think it epitomizes most of the friendships we make out here in cyberspace. Free of the judgments and restraints we place on ourselves regarding physical appearances, we can let our true light shine. (This is just a long winded way of saying -- I liked it!) |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Lame isn't the word I would have used, either. I liked it. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i enjoy a light verse tremendously...thanks for posting it moon  |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Thank you Terri & Sue... ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Thank you Elvira, In fact, the many light verses you have posted on Passions were an encouragement for me to write this one... ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The internet can bring us closer together and yet keep us apart. I liked this...not bad. Welcome! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Moonmoon, Don't give up to soon, enjoyed the read. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Thank you Sharon & Seymour... |
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