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Above The Wall |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Sometimes I sit here and think of you, And wonder how you are, I wonder if you're happy, I wonder from afar. I know that I should come closer, But that isn't easy for me to do, I'm sure you know the reason, You and I are two. So I sit here and wonder, Will this wall ever fall, Can our friendship grow strong, And above all...tall. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your work is succinct and passionate - a nice addition to our forum.....  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very nicely done. I like the tentativeness in this one. I wrote about a wall once.. I'll try to dig it up an e-mail it to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pen of Passion, You write well. Big TU |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Thank you all for your comments, and making me feel welcome here. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
P.O.P. We can only try to make you feel welcome. Because you 'fit' you are welcome! Does that make sense....like Passions is a puzzle filled with many pieces. Because you fit you are part of us. .............  |
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