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Bath Talk |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I like that, Sitting on the bathroom floor, Watching you take a bath, Talking to you. I stuck my hand In the water slowly Moved my fingers along The softness of your thigh. I took handfuls of water, Spilled them over your Milk and silken shoulders, Enjoying the gentle Sensuousness of your skin Slick with water. You had your hair pinned up In lovely disorder To keep from getting it wet. And you played as you talked, Little splashes With your fingertips. Talking a bath, I liked that, And I don't even remember Anything we said.. And then; I wanted to billow In your thighs The sweet havoc To burst beautiful A moment in you... Then, we could talk another bath! Long conversations are nice.... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).] [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
oohh, good one! What a romantic! |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Long conversations are nicest when it doesn't matter what you say. I was touched by this poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A poem that leaves me sighing with wishes for long conversations... *S* Absolutely beautiful! |
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Carolina Girl Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 63 |
I don't think I ever remember reading a romantic one of yours....and I think THIS one is very romantic, sensual...and just plain STEAMY!!! *fanning myself* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
but where's the duck?????....oh, got it!..too busy floating...:-))) HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Grabbing Mr. Bubble......  Whew! Sensual, romantic...what more could ya ask for? |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Well, as they say, cleanliness is next to godliness, eh Toe..(wink, wink, nudge,nudge) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Boy, when you said you were gonna keep it clean, I had no idea............ (very well done, btw) |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
okay Toerag, the romantic?, didn't anyone tell you about plagarizing?  ...if anyone makes it to europe or has been there, you absolutely have to try those bath tubs, they are big enough for two, taking a shower together just doesn't compare  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh I had no idea you had it in you!!! You can come scrub my back ANYTIME, now that I"ve read this ! Excuse me now - - (reaching for the Calgon)............... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem - it has all been said (I liked the form too by the way). I challenge you to bring it over to the Adult Forum with some 'adult' changes of course...perhaps extend the poem to include a little more.... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
PD.....I have a zillion "naughty" poems...I usually tried to use them to make LongJohn look rediculous in some way or another....I'll wander over there soon and polish them up a tad and see what happens...most are of the "humorous" nature....(can ya imagine?) |
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Carolina Girl Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 63 |
Oh Toe!! Yanno the Adult Poetry is going to LOVE you!!! Course, I always was a BIG fan of your naughty poems!!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno? I forgot that you, and Rainbow Girl, and Suthern and LongJohn have seen most of my God-Awful stuff?.... |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Ahhh but then what's a bathtub for? (smile) Can we have a shower sequel please? Very nicely done! Excuse me I have a bath to run... ------------------ Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Very romantic and sweet Toe... Now, tell LJA to post "his" bath poem... it's along the same lines...hmmmm...shall I do it for him? yep! |
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