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Open Poetry #1

A Dream

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

0 posted 1999-08-15 07:20 PM

I wonder how it would be,
To be something so great as to be free.
To be able to live in dignity,
Just you and me;living out our destiny.

To be strong and free enough to flee,
These countries....
These islands....
These seas....
To simply be.....
Free....
Just you and me....

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-16 12:26 PM

Oh Mark, I love your thoughts....how romantic...when do we leave..?? Fabulous piece...(as usual) I can't believe this hasn't gotten more responses....Back to the top!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-16 12:27 PM

Enjoyed your poem.Happy writing.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-16 02:37 AM

So beautifully romantic...I loved it.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

chanelle
New Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 9
canada

4 posted 1999-08-17 12:31 PM

Mark....your poem is truly what dreams are made of. So romantic,so refreshing to see that guys can feel such deep emotions :-)

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