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***** For Brandon ******* Hope this finds you...
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***** For Brandon ******* Hope this finds you... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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*** twinkle twinkle, my shining star how I wonder - where you are....******* Let me linger awhile - In your hearts broken walls... I have many a smile - A soul that hears your calls. I'll take the risk without fear - Step inside your dark cell... Be strong for I'm here - Walking with you through Hell. I'll free your soul from this mask - As I lift it with ease... Yes, you're worthy of dreams - If your heart so does please. You need love in a friend - I will help you unload... All this burden you carry - Loose your chains & their hold. I'm reaching for you - please grab hold of my hand... Let me help you pull through - For I do understand..... **I wrote this to you in reply to one of yours....apologies.......** ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
This won't find anybody stuck back here, such a fine message needs to be up at the top. (I hope he finds it ) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks Craig for your honest reply....and for sending it back up for me. I can't get this person to talk to me, and I know he needs a friend right now. I'm hoping he'll at least read this, even if he doesn't respond....I just want him to know that I care about what he's going through.....Thanks a million......! ****curtsies***** ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Sorry guys & gals for putting this back up myself, but I really want to make sure the person I wrote this for sees it.....I don't want it buried too deep too soon.....Thanks for allowing me this.....**smooches ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'm sure glad you did bring this back up, PoetFemmeFatale!! Wonderful message, I think that if someone said such kind things to me, I'd be very willing to talk with them..hopefully he will feel the same way. Exellent work!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Hey FemmeFatale, My name is Brandon and I sure wish it was me you were sending it to. I know better though unless you are a certain friend from a little while ago that I sort of lost and wouldn't mind having back. Anyway. This is a great poem and I commend you on it. This other Brandon is sure blessed to have a friend that is willing to be there for him. I know what is like to not have that. Jfreak |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you so much for your sincere reply...I read your profile though, and I don't think the info. matches....(some people in here use more than one username, so I was checking for that...) (sigh) I hope you find your "little friend" whereever they may be...it's always nice to know you've got someone to listen when you need to scream...glad to have met you, and welcome - although I see you have posted here many times, I've never seen your name before ?? ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'll be your friend, dear - (tho I'm not MALE -heheheh). Lovely writing as usual. Sad writing. Hope it all works out. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Come on Femme, I can't believe you haven't seen me before. Weren't you at the Scroll also? Anyway. I guess it's nice to be finally noticed. *wink* Jfreak |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
As always Poet your heart is big and loves to heal others. I only pray for you that Brandon reads and reaches within to reach out to you. As I am sure if he does he will be happy that he did. blueloon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks to everyone....you guys are all too kind!  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Can't let it slip away yet... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
What a kind soul you are Poet...I'm sure your friend will see this message to his heart, and even if he does not reply, he will always know that he can count on you. It's a beautiful poem. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet...I hope this message reaches the right person, he deserves to hear it and you deserve to be able to say it to him |
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