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Open Poetry #1

So I search

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

0 posted 1999-08-14 08:33 PM

Hello,

Hope you like.

In depths I search of meaning be,
In my inner self, to know what you see.
Do you miss my spoken words?
Long for my kiss to take what hurts?
Inside myself, I search for what is true,
do I miss the part of myself I lost,
or the part inside of you?
Does true love truely find the path,
of where you wait, a love once passed?
Can ever love find itself to be lost,
Does ever pain turn to love, what it cost?
So many questions I find inside,
Though so many answers, I will never find.
In depths I search of meaning be,
to find what I lost, to set it free.
Will forever to take to find whats there,
or will forever make me sit and stare.
I fear what I find, what I longed to see,
will be your love, but not for me.
So hear I wait, to rid the hurt,
Here I am, and so I search.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-17 11:46 AM

Very nice piece, and I see why you chose your name so appropriately....you write as if in this era!! Very nice!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

2 posted 1999-08-17 12:08 PM

I could trully relate with your poem; a kind of introspection to find meaning in love.Beautifull.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-17 12:16 PM

Capulet,
Some fine lines,I enjoyed the read

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

4 posted 1999-08-17 02:45 PM

Thank you muchly for the warm responses.
I'm glad you liked my style of writing
poetFemmeFatale

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

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