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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Softly as you sleep this angel creeps in beside you Strokes your hair and kisses your nose holds your hand as you smile in sleep nestles in your arms and they tighten up around me holding me close as in your dreams our love lives on behind closed lids your eyes smile at me and just for a moment again we are one.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful, Rainbow girl! Our love lives on behind closed lids... Such a beautiful line! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Wow, I can't decide if it's sweet or spooky.... but it flowed right through! ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Ms Rainbowvirginbritthinggieladydear......Ya never cease to amaze me.....by the way yall, this is the silly bitch that named me Toerag! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, dear lady!!!! As for naming Toe... ya done good! *G* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think she told me "Toerag" means: smart, sweet, kind, understanding, good looking, sexy, stud-like, and most of all....patient!......oh, I forgot one....Humble.... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-14-99).] |
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Carolina Girl Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 63 |
RainbowGirl.....Car Girl here....that was so wonderful!! This is the first poem I read on this site! I knew I'd love it when I clicked on your name! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Car Girl! Welcome to a REAL poetry board. It appears you read my email..? Now, get to work, Girl, and write! Write like you've never written before! (err, that didn't sound unambiguous, did it?) Queen - that was a terrifc poem. I could see you in his arms, hoping he wouldn't wake for just another minute - [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 08-14-99).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: Hmmmmm.... that doesn't resemble the definition she gave me in the least! LOL. She's far too smart to give you a name that implied you have patience! LOL. CG: Welcome aboard! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you all.....:-) Toe: You remembered word for word...LOL and I still think it's true..:-~~~~..*g* CG: Nice to see you here, welcome to peace and tranquility..  Big HUGS to each of you.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I missed this one and such a good one as well, I’m glad I found it and had the chance to put it back where it belongs, on top. I hope you give Toerag the real definition of his name, I get a picture of thousands of poetic Americans greeting each other as Toerags. That wouldn’t be right, would it? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Craig: Hmmmmm...There isn't really a definition that covers all of Toe, but I guess.."one outstanding human being", comes close.. Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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