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mister61 Junior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 41bergen county, nj |
In your eyes I see the past Pain and puzzle Tears and torment In your smile I see a light That splits the dark A breathtaking beacon In your voice Angels crying Beauty abused A silent symphony In your touch I feel the fear Longing to let go Clutching compassion In your arms Reaching and wrenching For tomorrow's hope With bygone betrayals In your heart Love everlasting Pure in its pleasure Aglow in its goodness In your soul I see a place Of sweetness and grace And welcoming warmth In you alone I see the years Unfolding and flowering With love everlasting In all these things I see one life Two puzzles together A portrait complete |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is lovely writing! I look forward to more from you.  |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed...  ------------------ Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done: For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits, Than I am sure I have in my whole five. ~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
In your poem... I see talent! *G* Great job! |
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mister61 Junior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 41bergen county, nj |
Thanks for the notes - they're appreciated! |
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