Open Poetry #1 |
Hollow Friends |
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
its beating on my mind again, where is the hollow friend, i want that craving, makes me feel small, thrown around someones rag doll, but im in heaven, hell's release, no more chains,no more leash, i can breathe,and im alive, nothing kicking me inside, the power of love, has found me dead ------------------ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Welcome to the forums. I don't think I've seen your post before... This is a dynamic piece. I particularly like the phrase "beating on my mind again". Other lines stand out for me, also: "but I'm in heaven/hell's release" and the last lines, "the power of love/has found me dead" Very interesting and powerful work. Thanks for posting. I'll look forward to reading more. -dp |
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