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PGA
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since 1999-08-13
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Abilene, Texas

0 posted 1999-08-13 06:32 PM


As I get older I realize more and more the importance of love. Without love our world would crumble. It is the underlying foundation. Without love we die. God gave us love to survive. Let us not withhold it from anyone. Too often games are played with love and it can be like a bloody sword when used that way. It is the most powerful weapon of all.

Last night I loved. She said too soon. I said I loved. She said friends. I said lovers. She said I didn't know what she wanted. I said she did. We all want love but question what we will give for it. We must learn to open our hearts no matter the cost. Walk out on that limb, trust me and leap into my arms. I will sacrifice my life before I will let you fall. I will catch you. I will shield you and protect you. Most of all I will love you. Love is its own reward. True love asks nothing in return. I ask nothing.

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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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1 posted 1999-08-13 07:03 PM


Incredible sincerity in this writing and a high emotional level. Well done.

(and, besides, how can I not like someone whose initials spell out my favorite organization?)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-08-13 07:12 PM


Agree with Balladeer. Well done.
Star Fairy
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since 1999-08-11
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cerritos, ca, usa
3 posted 1999-08-13 10:03 PM


with all my problems with love right now... that sounds exactly like what i wanted to say... except i couldnt think of the words.. ironic?

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