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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Seeds The seeds of change fly about Some will settle some will sprout. Some transcend in hibernate And some will not consummate. Some of each will surely fruit, Or life surely would not root And change is not what is strange, Change is but a rearrange. We are all a type of seed, Some will live and some will breed Some will vie, some will die and Some will fly, God knows why? It seems a cycle I'd say From clay to a better clay. We may prolong our end but High numbers surely offend. I think God waits patiently, The end or what grows to be? |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
And change is not what is strange Change is but a rearrange... --how very true..!! I like this one Seymour..  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one, Seymour. You've got some good phrases here..  |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Wonderfully writ Seymour! ------------------ Dum spiro, spero JP |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Moonmoon,poetdeVine and JP. It is nice of you to visit my poem and comment. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy these are wonderful thoughts - expressed through a beautiful metaphor - with lots of internal rhyme.... makes me a happy reader ... |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful again. enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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