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pen of passion
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since 1999-08-11
Posts 234


0 posted 1999-08-12 10:07 PM


Most feelings are like shooting stars,
That never last.

The first time we met,
Blue eyes meeting blue,
I got this incredible feeling.

And when you smiled at me,
And gave my hand a small squeeze,
Guess what? This incredible feeling.

Then you buzzed my cheek,
With a kiss so sweet,
Oh, what an incredible feeling.

And surprise! It repeats,
Each time we meet,
This incredible feeling.

[This message has been edited by pen of passion (edited 08-13-99).]

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Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

1 posted 1999-08-12 10:22 PM


Sounds like you have found wonderful, sweet love....
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-08-13 02:01 AM


Welcome to the forums, "pen of passion"
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-08-13 09:52 AM


Welcome to the family! I see in your profile that you're an artist. Do you paint? Draw? Just curious.

moonmoon
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
4 posted 1999-08-18 12:16 PM




You seem to be blissfully in love, pen of passion..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



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