Open Poetry #1 |
Whisst Orren |
Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Whisst Orren (Nameless Spirit) Have you ever seen Him face to face Trying hard to lift your gaze? Have you looked upon His countenance Amid the shining rays? Have you seen His skin of bronze And His eyes of burning coal? Have you felt His hand caress you As He gazes deep in your soul? Look about at the grass so green A golden glow fills the sky; He welcomes all who come to Him, He'll never pass you by. Such sweet sorrow and loneliness Can be filled by looking His way, And if you've never seen these things Why not friend today? Inspired by Stephen Lawhead's many trilogies, "The Song of Albion", "In the Hall of the Dragonking", and "The Pendragon Cycle". ------------------ Le Jongleur Aspirante avec les bete chapeaux |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I just never know quite what to expect from you, Alicat.... But I can always count on the fact that it'll be good... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-24-99).] |
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Red Letter Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 85Allentown, PA |
hmmmm nice reminder.... I like it. Thanks for the read - as always, a spell-binding experience. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this was the last poem in the forum why cuz its bad umm no dont think so great read!! great verse |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Thanks, WayOutWalt. Thought I'd never see this one up here again...lost in the archives. Alicat Alastair |
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