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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-08-12 07:14 PM


I sit here all alone
why?
well, I did have my friends
but someone took them all away
and left me on my own..

I feel my friends
helped me make my point
they were with me all the time
helping me express my thoughts
but not always in words that rhyme

and now I'm here and all alone
not one of them is here
and so I sit so very quiet
shedding silent tears!

In loving memory of my friends: The Comma

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-12-99).]

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Craig
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1 posted 1999-08-12 07:19 PM



RainbowGirl

Comma's are best left well alone

L,O,L,

,

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-08-12 07:20 PM


I was in a coma once...is that the same?
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 1999-08-12 07:23 PM


ROFLMAO

Forgive my humour please...LOL...It is in good spirit (and I never once mentioned cognac)...I just can't help myself...I've lost it: totally...and so have you...Oh dear: smile, go away...ROFL

As I run for cover...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-12-99).]

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 1999-08-12 09:04 PM


Dare i say...

Is the colon our friend?

(couldn't help the childish humor, since at heart I'm still a child!)

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Where did I go wrong, I never needed this before,
I need a woman, to help me feel.
-Live-

Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-08-12 09:04 PM


DeVine, didn't you mean period? I had a colon-oscopy once. Does that count? Nice going, Rainbow girl.
Terri
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6 posted 1999-08-13 01:32 AM


Don't get me started on periods! (Sorry, couldn't help myself--gonna go stand in the corner now)
Poet deVine
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7 posted 1999-08-13 01:38 AM


Do not take the name 'colon' in vain as that is the hometown of our dearest Ron! Yes, he hails from Colon, Michigan! Who names these places anyway? What about Yellville, Arkansas? Wiggins, Mississippi? Sharon, Pennsylvania?
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