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Victoria Smith New Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1Wilmington, NC USA |
The Sun and Moon Why can't the sun and moon every meet? Do they know its impossible or are they still trying? How could the sun turn its back to the earth form an eclipse? Why can't the sun and moon every meet? Was there no one to encourage them to try the impossible? How could the stars touch the sky but not reach for the earth? Why does the sun form shadows from earth's treasures? Why can't the sun and moon every meet? Why do little drops of rain that are meant to replenish the earth, flood overflowing the land? How come the winds bring whispers of nature yer can destroy all? Why can't the sun and moon every meet? Did anyone tell them of the possibilities? Did you ever wonder why the grass looks greenier when the suns out? How do the trees give so much yet receive so little? Why can't the sun and moon every meet? Did no one tell them of the future? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hi Victoria, welcome to the family. I liked what you were saying..especially in light of the fact that we are nearing the last solar eclipse of the century. May I suggest that you click on the icon with the little pencil on it and edit the word 'every' to 'ever'..I look foward to reading more from you! |
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