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Glory |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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The glory of the world, washes over my well worn body. The magnificence of creation, the total harmony of nature, the absolute certainty provided, by the knowledge of life's continuance, rages through my soul. The brilliance of love, flashes in my sorrow soiled mind. The gentleness of sweet lovemaking, the urgency felt in passions thrust, the sweet release in climatic lust, dream states induced in afterglow, ease through my heart. The glory of the world, touches magic upon my dying flame. Flashes of sunlight in the morn, flickers of flame in campfire night, tendrils of melody in child song, essence of harmony in lover's laugh, bathe my dirty, well used mind. The beauty of this world, comes to me in many ways. Fathomless, unrelenting ways, only to look, to feel, to see, only to open myself, to be me, only to allow you, a love to be, touch me and make me whole. ------------------ Dum spiro, spero JP |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your last two posts sound as if you have had an epiphany. Well done, sir! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
Epiphany??? Well its the first time I've heard 'it' called that...hahaha Splendid lyrical stuff!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'd like to know exactly what *you* have been feasting on...cause I want some as well, so share!...  Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Now this is gorgeous - talk about feel the atmosphere. Really well done; I particularly like the 3rd verse. |
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