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zipknee Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 35Oak Park, IL |
It grasps on holds tight squeezing, choking you cry out cower, run away blindly tripping struggle to release clinging claws tears streaming hands trembling surrender or fight back internal battlefield rage against pain break the grasp loosen its hold suppress trembles wipe away tears pick up pieces of broken spirit move on past the enemy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hi! This is nice - fast paced, which really helps with the mood evoked. Great writing. |
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