Open Poetry #1 |
Reaping the Rewards |
pusskatt Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30Austrralia |
Broken soul I feel so old so tired so scared so alone... Broken soul on the mend learning it's me on who to depend Not man not dream things are never as they seem Broken soul soon at peace knowing it's with my own love that I will reap.... |
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pusskatt Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30Austrralia |
Sombody please respond I would love to know how I am doing!!! |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Well I hope this isn't entirely autobiographic, in any case, I like the rhythm, but I prefer showing rather than telling... but hey, what do I know? |
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