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deannamarie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
WI

0 posted 1999-08-11 09:13 AM


I just whipped this out two seconds ago. Tell me what you think.

You Never Know

You never know what you really had
until you lose it

You never know what you really lost
until you miss it

You never know what you really missed
until you see it

You never know what you really saw
until you touch it

You never know what you really touched
until you feel it

You never know what you really felt
until you say it

You never know what you really said
until you mean it

You never know what you really meant
until you want it

You never know what you really wanted
until you have it

You never know what you really had
until you lose it again

Deanna Ballman
8-11-99


© Copyright 1999 deannamarie - All Rights Reserved
Sue
Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
1 posted 1999-08-11 09:20 AM


Clever, and still true. I like it.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-11 10:36 AM


This is true. I liked it.
deannamarie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
WI
3 posted 1999-08-11 12:02 PM


Thanks
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-08-11 08:11 PM


I like it!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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