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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-10 12:27 PM

Meow

Once when prudence turned to foolish
A change touched issue to my brow
A wily blow was brought to bear
On the vent of some cats meow.

The obvious of lain once lamb.
Rose up to be a Lions' roar.
And the subtle sword of cunning
Cut chaos on my Cupid's door.

Chivalry died and bellied up
Sensitivity ceased a spell.
Jealousy that shapeless monster
Opened a crack the doors of hell.

And the barb found the hearts tender
Driven in by a selfish floor.
By the prick of a subtle doubt
But strong enough to kill amour.

And the cat raised its tail in spae
Purred, turned its back and walked away.

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

1 posted 1999-08-10 12:33 PM

Seymour!! you made me miss my devilish little kitten that I had to give away. I loved your poem.
blueloon

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-10 03:46 PM

Sorry about that, Thanks for the read and comment.

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

3 posted 1999-08-11 02:27 AM

"Jealousy that shapeless monster" Monster indeed, jealousy is probably the worst thing that can happen to a relationship. Loved the poem.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

4 posted 1999-08-11 04:49 AM

that's why i only have female kitties

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-08-11 10:22 AM

Thank you Sue and Elvira Love to get comments on my poems.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 1999-08-11 01:32 PM

Hm.... Just when my temporary cat has moved out....

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-11-99).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-08-11 04:33 PM

Nan, that is a provocative statment!!!!
What kind of a cat were you talking about????

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-06-20 04:59 PM

beautiful and interesting.

beautiful and I love the ending.

enjoyed.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-11-10 09:43 PM

i love cats

ARCTIC WIND

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