Open Poetry #1 |
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Where love has sown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Where Love has sown Love like pollen spore has blown And somewhere in me has sown. And I am enceinte, Full bloom and overblown. The drama, a chameleon bold, Showing radiant rainbows unfold And transient as the clouds above A pageant of symbols twice-told. And its bloom peaks beauty each day, Just like the queen of a soiree. But the dance takes toll, Like a Salome. Quixotic as an angels kiss Here and with overtones of bliss, It rules my wake and dreams, Each bloom a genesis. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
"Love like a pollen spore" I love it. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Good job. A bit uneven in places but overall a good use of the language. I like the metaphor and similie (is that correct Nan?) ------------------ Dum spiro, spero JP |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sue and JP. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so beautiful. truly beautiful for a soul that open to love and to love...all beautiful. the true song of love. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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