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Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
0 posted 1999-08-09 07:17 AM

It's rained today since early morning
Angels crying in the sky
Crystal drops each leaf adorning
Bees and birds too wet to fly.
Trees and flowers all saturated
Cow in byre and pig in sty.
All the world is concentrated
On the task of keeping dry.
© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
Poetwheel
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 208
Canada
1 posted 1999-08-09 07:21 AM

I really loved the ending of this one...I found it quite cute.

Nice job.

PW
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
2 posted 1999-08-09 10:37 AM

Well done, Sue. I like the rain and ferquently stand out in storms. You are probably right...it isn't safe but I don't care. Thank you for sharing.

INclan
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