Open Poetry #1 |
Eye of the Storm |
INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I sense my lovers approach in the distant rolling thunder. Her sweet scent like rain hangs musty in the air. I feel the end of calm as her passion washes over me. Though I live in a world of darkness, I need no eyes to see, The lightening pass between us as my lover....loves me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, one of my favorite subjects....rain. Check out my new posting Your Storm. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
I love the darkness and lightening! Nice work. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent! I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Great!! I love storms, and this was wonderful!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you all for your generous encouragement. INclan |
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