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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-08-09 12:05 PM


If there was one thing in life
I was always searching for
Just one night of priceless peace
I would ask for nothing more
You take such trifles for granted
It's so easy you can't believe
But that is all I wanted
And so much more did I receive

There is only one way out
From the darkness and its reign
Through the embrace of my Lord
That will ease me of my pain
But He tells me He knows me not
And lists my forgotten sins
Through the torture of eternity
I am going to fit right in

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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1 posted 1999-08-09 12:11 PM


Hey Walt, I think you have the seat right next to mine! Liked this one !

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
2 posted 1999-08-09 01:11 AM


Walt, this piece says a lot to me! I really like it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



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