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P.Z
Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 15
Singapore

0 posted 1999-08-08 10:58 PM



He has a pair of beautiful eyes,
The type that will comfort you when you cry.

He is so kind and considerate,
Being with him makes me feel so great.

He has a pair of beautiful hands,
That held me close to him when we dance.

He is faithful and sincere,
That is why my love for him grows year after year.

He stood by me through good and bad times,
I am so glad that he is mine.

He slipped a ring on my finger,
And finally asked me to be his girl.

Engraved beneath under the ring were three words,
It simply said "I love thee".

© Copyright 1999 P.Z - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-11 07:33 PM


Love, can be a wonderful thing. I married mine too.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-08-11 07:41 PM


Lucky girl I do believe!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Artur Hawkwing
Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
3 posted 1999-08-11 07:43 PM


I agree with WhtDove, except mine's years to come. Short, but full of thought.
angel girl
Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
4 posted 1999-08-12 08:01 AM


I agree with Artur.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare


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