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Open Poetry #1

Over the Years

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 1999-08-08 03:13 AM

We've both changed over the years.
You've got less hair,
And there's more of me than there used to be.
But the things that count are still the same.

I still love you like I always did,
You still bring out the best in me.
I still write you love poems,
You still sing me love songs.

We've both changed over the years.
You've gotten mellower,
And I've gotten bloder.
But in many ways we're still the same.

I still make you candle-light dinners,
You still surprise me with flowers.
I still have a trick or two up my sleeve,
You still make me smile with my heart.

Sharon Lee Rotondi
(Enotneicna)

[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 08-08-99).]

Twilight_Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 22
USA

1 posted 1999-08-08 04:58 AM

what a sweet message...very nicely written

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-08 05:22 AM

Love it!

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-08-09 09:21 PM

what a lovely sentiment...*sigh*...to grow old together with the one you love

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

4 posted 1999-08-09 10:02 PM

I hope to write a poem just like this when I have lived life with my soulmate.. nicely written.

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