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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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0 posted 1999-08-07 12:46 PM


Acceptance

Emotions and oceans, entwine
Where sand and mind the concubine.
The cradle sways a quiet tree
The lullaby of ennui.
Death strikes like a stone in a pond
After the crash ripples respond
Trough and cave and ripple and wave
A viscus remorse veils the grave.
And stars above the ocean sit,
They ring me like an opiate.


© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-07 08:46 PM


I've already read this one three times and I'm going back for more...
Dragoness
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2 posted 1999-08-07 08:53 PM


I loved this!!

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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3 posted 1999-08-07 08:55 PM


Very nice

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-08-09 11:14 PM


Just want to thank you lovely people.
aziza
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5 posted 2007-06-08 02:42 AM


Lovely.

A

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-06-20 04:54 PM


very good, very good love
"Emotions and oceans, entwine
Where sand and mind the concubine."
beautiful.

enjoyed

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-11-10 09:42 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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