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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-07 08:46 AM

Isabel

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
From the lava mountains came,
Heightened heights of ice from flame,
Sermon symbols of her name.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
My agonies, my ecstasies,
My bell that tolls both qualities
And seems to sail on fantasies?

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
A tongue that double strike my mind
The hell that I would leave behind
And all the heaven I would find.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
This gift of life with me the heir,
Heaven a sense beyond compare
And hell a cross that I must bear.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
Spirit of the cell I dwell,
Bell, the echo and the knell,
Heaven and hell my Isabel.

Heaven, the fruition of need,
And hell is in doing the deed.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 1999-08-07 09:14 AM

Hey! I like this style... think I'll just try to plagiarize it for my own use... heh heh heh

Incidently, I also liked the way you led me through that into the concluding lines...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-08-07 11:43 AM

Very nice, Sy..... Ya done good!!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-07 04:50 PM

Thank you LngJhnAg and Nan

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-08-07 05:30 PM

As striking as when I first heard it....you must know this Isabel pretty well....good job, Sy.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-08-07 08:59 PM

Very nice form, rhyme and rhythym in this one. It is really a nice piece of work.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

6 posted 1999-08-07 09:40 PM

This was wonderful!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-06-20 04:45 PM

again, one of my favorite. have read the revised version. So very good, the love and the truth.

enjoyed

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-11-10 09:40 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2011-12-24 05:54 PM

There are only a few that can rhyme like Si, and here's to you and Isabel. You are in our thoughts.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2011-12-25 08:28 PM

Thank you Sharon for bringing these forward~~

M

sasanka7
Junior Member

since 2010-11-17

Posts 30

11 posted 2012-01-03 08:16 AM

Very Nice.

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