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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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She said you want? He said ok She said we stand? He said we'll lay. She said my gown He said it's off. She said don't be.. He said too rough? She said in yet? He said yeah, why? She said you sure? He said you're dry. She said your touch He said that help? She said not much He said you whelp! She said you done? HE said the end. She said so long. He said bye friend. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I said it was good He said it was ok I said it was over He just went away. You're so funny! I loved this one!!!!! Sounds like my marriage in the final throes of dispassion....  |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh Balladeer... what are we going to do with you? hehehe  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
and in reply she said to him: the next time you need a "friend"...dont' call me, just use your hand  |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Such deep felt meaning behind these words...hehehe |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
ok.. I'm taking away your beer now!! hahahhaa what the heck is that??..... you crazy guy.. (ok i thought it was funny).. but I'll never admit it... hahahahha hahahha hhahahah (ooopsssyy) |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Great poem! You know, this kind of thing always happens when you dare to go swimming in the winter. He'll jump right in (a macho thing) while she, (the smarter of the two) stands at the side looking at the cold water, thinking "no way". (staying dry) Just my interpretation (not avowing it's the correct one) |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
I would rather do without than a quickie! I once enjoyed an extended time with a man, which is so much better! But I agree, have another beer "deer". |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
If you keep making me laugh like this I'm going to pop one of my stitches.. I loved it.. Now that was so short it reminded me of one of my ex's.. hehehehehe No love there huh?  Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno?...Old LongJohn's gonna really get tired of us writing about him all the time.......I remember the last time he was telling me about slipping six inches to his sweet wife....it was on his honeymoon if I recall...of course, he had to do it three times to give her six.....He's a real Casanova yanno?....Puts on some of that Tommy Hilfiger underwear, a little after shave (Catch of the Day's his favorite), and he's fit for a queen!....Of course yanno, old Casanova wasn't the greatest lover anyhow.....it was that other fella...."Came-alot?" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL!!! A toast to Balladeer!!! But how DO you know LJA so well??? LOL... Oh...that's right... the diner kiss! *G* Guess he told ALL his secrets! *G* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
'Deer Don't be discouraged by all these critics. They lack the sensitivity to understand that even you have problems. The next time she catches you wearing her gown during the Boy's Night poker party, just fold instead of standing pat or laying down your hand. As for shuffling the cards.. yannow, if you don't bend them back so far and treat them so rough, they'll last a lot longer. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All right!! That's it!!! This place is out of control!!!!! Goin' down for the third time here.....  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
er, Nan? Ynno, this probably isn't the right forum for talking about going down.... heh heh heh |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
That's right Nan...this is not the proper forum as LongJohn said,...now then,,I happen to have a little forum right here in my office, (not the oval office by the way), and I don't even smoke cigars?...So, ya wanna make some rhythm?...... |
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