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Balladeer
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0 posted 1999-08-06 10:21 PM


She said you want?
He said ok
She said we stand?
He said we'll lay.
She said my gown
He said it's off.
She said don't be..
He said too rough?
She said in yet?
He said yeah, why?
She said you sure?
He said you're dry.
She said your touch
He said that help?
She said not much
He said you whelp!
She said you done?
HE said the end.
She said so long.
He said bye friend.

© Copyright 1999 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-06 10:27 PM


I said it was good
He said it was ok
I said it was over
He just went away.


You're so funny! I loved this one!!!!! Sounds like my marriage in the final throes of dispassion....


~one voice~
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2 posted 1999-08-06 10:44 PM


Oh Balladeer... what are we going to do with you? hehehe

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



elvira
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3 posted 1999-08-06 11:25 PM


and in reply she said to him: the next time you need a "friend"...dont' call me, just use your hand
Lucie
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4 posted 1999-08-07 12:20 PM


Such deep felt meaning behind these words...hehehe
redwriter1
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Franklin, TN
5 posted 1999-08-07 12:58 PM


ok.. I'm taking away your beer now!!
hahahhaa

what the heck is that??.....

you crazy guy.. (ok i thought it was funny).. but I'll never admit it...

hahahahha
hahahha
hhahahah
(ooopsssyy)

thursdayschild
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6 posted 1999-08-07 03:09 AM


Great poem! You know, this kind of thing always happens when you dare to go swimming
in the winter. He'll jump right in (a macho
thing) while she, (the smarter of the two)
stands at the side looking at the cold water,
thinking "no way". (staying dry)
Just my interpretation
(not avowing it's the correct one)

Cinderella
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Arizona
7 posted 1999-08-07 03:16 AM


I would rather do without than a quickie! I once enjoyed an extended time with a man, which is so much better! But I agree, have another beer "deer".
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8 posted 1999-08-07 04:14 AM


If you keep making me laugh like this I'm going to pop one of my stitches.. I loved it.. Now that was so short it reminded me of one of my ex's.. hehehehehe
No love there huh?


Love,
Lady

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Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 1999-08-07 08:14 AM


Yanno?...Old LongJohn's gonna really get tired of us writing about him all the time.......I remember the last time he was telling me about slipping six inches to his sweet wife....it was on his honeymoon if I recall...of course, he had to do it three times to give her six.....He's a real Casanova yanno?....Puts on some of that Tommy Hilfiger underwear, a little after shave (Catch of the Day's his favorite), and he's fit for a queen!....Of course yanno, old Casanova wasn't the greatest lover anyhow.....it was that other fella...."Came-alot?"
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10 posted 1999-08-07 08:40 AM


ROFL!!! A toast to Balladeer!!! But how DO you know LJA so well??? LOL... Oh...that's right... the diner kiss! *G* Guess he told ALL his secrets! *G*
LngJhnAg
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11 posted 1999-08-07 09:21 AM


'Deer

Don't be discouraged by all these critics. They lack the sensitivity to understand that even you have problems. The next time she catches you wearing her gown during the Boy's Night poker party, just fold instead of standing pat or laying down your hand. As for shuffling the cards.. yannow, if you don't bend them back so far and treat them so rough, they'll last a lot longer.

Nan
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12 posted 1999-08-07 09:56 AM


All right!! That's it!!!
This place is out of control!!!!!
Goin' down for the third time here.....


LngJhnAg
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13 posted 1999-08-07 10:00 AM


er, Nan?

Ynno, this probably isn't the right forum for talking about going down.... heh heh heh

Toerag
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Ala bam a
14 posted 1999-08-07 10:04 AM


That's right Nan...this is not the proper forum as LongJohn said,...now then,,I happen to have a little forum right here in my office, (not the oval office by the way), and I don't even smoke cigars?...So, ya wanna make some rhythm?......
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