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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-08-06 04:36 PM

Come to me
Do not hesitate
I am not funky

Please be mine
Let our hearts entwingle
Like honeysucker

Jump around me
Scuff my boots
Fingerpoke at me

Skippy-TOE by
with owl growls
And Fa-la-la's

Love me with
All your grits
As I love you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 1999-08-06 04:43 PM

What passion, what presentation, what purty verses! LOL. My heart beats pitty-pat... my grits are yours! *G*

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-08-06 04:53 PM

Toerag I have a question??? Is your family tree a straight line??? hahahhaha

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 1999-08-06 05:08 PM

Naww.....it has limbs...really....but I'm just the sap.....

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

4 posted 1999-08-06 10:23 PM

this is the worst piece of "writing" i've ever read.. hahah.. sorry.. but I try to be honest... (geesshh)...

(i think this is a test to see if we tell the truth here).. I for one.. DO..

(smile)

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-08-06 10:28 PM

What a silver-tongued devil you are! This is a poem of the first grade!

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

6 posted 1999-08-07 12:55 PM

rokey dokey....LOL That's 'bout all I gots ta say 'bout that.

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

7 posted 1999-08-07 02:33 AM

you have a way AROUND words! this is too
cute...loved it!

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 1999-08-07 02:42 AM

I'm not sure they really WERE words

But I must admit to it having caught my eye and made me think,
made me wonder,
what kind of spell,
this Toerag's under...

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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars.
-Unknown-
So let the sun beat down upon my face,
It's warmth will dry my tears.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 1999-08-07 09:31 AM

Tippy toes and
Nose to nose
So the garden grows.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 1999-08-07 09:37 AM

Toe, old friend... you have a lot of nerve, or not a nerve. That was one piece of really ugly writing... I'm still lmao at the sheer audacity you had to write something this bad. Knowing you, I'll bet your skinned crawled with every line you wrote. great job.

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