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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
As shadow's fold in to dark, no light of day to find With only moon beams brilliance, left to chill the mind As parents tuck their children, in to there little nests And wash the day of done, off their aching chests As they lie with-in their cradles, of quilted feathered fray I rise from rested sleep, to take their dreams away Their doors they try to cover, with eye's shut, I still see All I need discover, to enter in to thee As lowly fear has planted, a seed of weakening ill I fly into the night, and strip them of their will I creep into their dreams, and beckon my command In sleep they do awaken to heed to my demands As thy welcoming chamber is offered up to me I fly into the night into the night I feed From those with wretched tongue, who dare to curse my name I take more then I need to kindle Satan's flame `Tis weak of heart and mind and coy misguided slum That gaze into my eye's, with a silver deviled tongue, Into my eyes they stare, these meek mindless swine Seeing nothing there of the life they left behind Intoxicating power pulling at their soul they see the feeding hour And the lust it does unfold In anticipation of pleasures they have never known They lay upon the bed, as they wait to be my own Toss away the nightie and brush away their hair With their eye's wide open In trance they find me there One to one connection One is all they know severing one, their master For eternity they go As their jugular invites me I thrust like the thorn of the rose Feeding for the hunger, I drain their body's dry For death shall not be still, as we live admits the night I feed until I have them, under my control They moan with satisfaction Giving up their soul Tori 1999 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think Then I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. [This message has been edited by tori (edited 08-06-99).] |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Chills are still running up and down my spine... This one made me want to lock my door at night a little more tightly!!! This was truly a masterpiece. |
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PrincessDoo Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41Cerritos, CA, USA |
that was tyte ... real dam scary.. but very nicely written... ------------------ 823 |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Emmy and PrincessDoo I'm glad you enjoyed this little ditty... :-) |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Tori, WOW! This piece is so frightening! I too shall be checking the locks on my doors at night! I could feel my heart pounding as I read this! Wow... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Why thank you so much ~One... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
tori this was a wee bit too scary for me. I think I'll just wander on over to my profile and change my address. see ya (I hope not). good job - I like it for the images you were able to invoke. |
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