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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
to the wild abandon that pulses within her heart. Heart and soul, given to God, trusting in Him to bring unto her the love and care she has faith, will always be there. Swallowed at times by the pain she carries hidden deep inside, her faith in the Lord carried her through as her spirit soared. Lost in darkness then abandoned by herself and those who she thought were friends, God though, forgave her all of her sins. She found the strength to crawl out of the pit she had fallen in, only to find no trace of God's infinite mercy, love and grace. Feeling dejected, forgotten by God, and hollow from the wages of sin, she still has hope that someone will help her to cope. So she kept her faith and endured a terribly lonely sacrifice to awaken one day and find the Lord had never truly, left her behind. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-06-99).] [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-06-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream, this is absolutely a wonderful tribute to a fine gal! She is lucky to have you in her life!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written Dream....I really, really, enjoyed this piece. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Beautiful! ------------------ "There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart" |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I really enjoyed this piece - It conveys a great message, and it's written in an appealing format - All in all - A good'n!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enjoyed the read TU |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Really love this one. Truly significant message expressed...through the darkness, there remains a glimmer of light, dim but not forgotten. Thanks for sharing this. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Just Beautiful. A tear in my eye. No word comes to mind just BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
I gotta love my brother.. *hugs* Thank you Love.. yur the greatest! ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Another wonderful piece by DreamEvil.. I have to thank you for sharing.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
A bit bulky but it says what I feel and what I know quite well. Thank you everyone. Gentle Soul, little sister, especially thank you. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Still love it...even more! |
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