Open Poetry #1 |
The Silent Pain of Aloness |
Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Locked up in my shadowy room. Lying in the silence of darkness. On a warm summer's night. Feeling the cold chills of loneliness run up my spine. My heart aches with pain of aloness. The tears of rejection slowly run down my checks. While thinking of how it feels to be pushed aside. Feeling afraid to talk my mind, because someone might be listening, and be critical with reject. As I lye I think of what it would be like, to be like for who I am. But knowing I never will, because of the fact that no one cares to know me. Having all these feelings locked away, because their's no one to tell them to. Feeling like exploding, but all I can do is scream the tears out, and cry myself to sleep. With only the warmth of the sheets. Never knowing any other warmth. Just a cold shoulder, and being brushed away. ------------------ ©Misty Please read and tell me what you think! [This message has been edited by Misty (edited 08-05-99).] |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS POEM, I would like to know if it's any good ------------------ ©Misty |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
I FEEL THAT WAY MANY NIGHTS. THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF WAS VERY GOOD. |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks for the reply! Atleast someone liked it! ------------------ ©Misty |
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