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Open Poetry #1

Tired

fjones
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 98
MS

0 posted 1999-06-19 08:35 PM

Lord I am so tired.
I want to come home.
You have tried me.
You have tested my every fiber
I have been through the refining fire
I am ready to see your loving face
I want to worry no more.
Lord please bring me home.
Life here is no longer easy.
My frail abode is decaying.
My soul is crying for freedom.
I am ready for the sweet reunions.
My work is over.
Give me rest under your protective wings.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-06-19 08:51 PM

So who said life was easy? Afraid I'll have to side with Dylan Thomas on this one. Nice piece of writing.

fjones
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 98
MS

2 posted 1999-06-19 08:56 PM

Just had a long tiring day.I Had to write some Southern "Soul" words to relax.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-06-20 01:23 PM

Very potent words... and well said..
Here's some sunshine for ya...

Sharon
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since 2001-06-04

Posts 53
Within a whisper

4 posted 2001-06-27 11:12 PM

What a soulful poem......

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-02-11 04:30 PM

I feel tired too...(hugs) I hope you are feeling peaceful now, it's been 3 years since you posted this LOL

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