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elvira
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0 posted 1999-08-04 12:43 PM




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Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-04 08:56 PM


But do allow me to dream....


LngJhnAg
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2 posted 1999-08-04 09:32 PM


elvira,

Yanno, this was kinda dark. However, since you can't hear/feel/see....


grope...grope....grope *veg*

ELVIRA!

You should have heard/felt/seen what that naughty Toerag and 'Deer just did!

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Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-08-04 09:40 PM


Uh-UH!! Wasn't me! Toerag got his 5 senses in!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-08-04 10:58 PM


Elvira....beautiful poem. I really enjoyed the feel of this one. It works so well, so many emotions expressed with so few words.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

elvira
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5 posted 1999-08-04 11:09 PM




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elvira
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6 posted 1999-08-05 02:40 PM




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