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Lil-bit
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 1999-08-04 10:27 AM


Changes in emotion come and go
Like the tides on the beach shore
Five minutes ago I was fine
Now I'm mad

Into my life comes
Someone who can see
That there is something wrong with me
Such swings in mood
Are more than latitude and longitude

He calls them WAVES
The highs and lows
Surfing he goes
Hanging ten with all toes
Staying afloat
Sometimes he needs a boat

Emotions crashing hard
Her body left scarred
Many tears to be dried
Sanity tried
A fragile mind
Left behind

Bi-Polar is what she is told
Leaving her feeling cold
The word manic
Makes her want to panic
Memories of yester-year
Reminds her of fear

Her life she turned
From that day all her poetry she burned
Flames of her past
Have come to haunt her at last
Days she left with a bye
Are here again with a sigh



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INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 1999-08-04 10:48 AM


hang in there....there is life after the storm. I am glad you ended on a hopeful note.

INclan

Lil-bit
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 1999-08-04 01:43 PM


Inclan - you cant help yourself. You love happy endings. Just remember that NOT everything in life turns out that way.

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