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A Singing of Songs |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
I'll sing a song of sympathy for those who have loved and lost I know how it feels to give all you've got and still have to pay the cost I'll sing a song of understanding for those who can't let go I knew how it feels to find love in a knot when you thought you just tied a bow I'll sing a song of sorrow for those with broken hearts I know how it feels when love shatters and you have to pick up the parts I'll sing a song of pain for those who have to choose I know how it feels to have to decide when either way you lose I'll sing a song of shedded tears for those who all too often cry I know how it feels when it's just to much and you want to lay down and just die I'll sing a song of hope for those who are moving on I know how it feels to want to give up... but then the triumph in seeing the dawn. [This message has been edited by Emmy (edited 08-03-99).] [This message has been edited by Emmy (edited 08-03-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Emmy....this is a wonderful message and your rhyme is almost perfect....my only suggestion would be to smoothen out the flow just a bit on a few lines, very easily done. Nice work! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
what a lovely sentiment, Emmy...i guess we have all been in those situations at one time or another  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim ...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving... Master...chat?...apart...plain...vice...shameless self promotion |
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