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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Thoughts of aging weigh me down My great big feet just drag... I just passed a full length mirror And saw how my ass sags! Boobs drifted deep south years ago - Succumbed to cruel gravity. My navel rests between the pair To grace my pudgy tummy. Deep crevices called wrinkles Surround my lips and eyes. And when did these barrels take the place Of my once decent thighs? If I sit too long, an aching starts Within my lower back, But if I walk, then each step brings From one or both knees CRACK! Without split ends and covered gray, My hair would cease to exist. The makeup doesn’t even cover the flaws. I’m not sure why I persist? My disposition, once so sweet, Has lost out to despair. So stay put on those bar stools, guys. I simply do not care! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm a little confused? Are you a topless dancer in a bar? Is that what you mean by telling the guys to stay put on their bar stools? (lol) This was painfully cute. Now, if you'll excuse me Ms. Loreal awaits!  |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Suthern, I know for a fact it's not this bad honey...so tell it like it is next time...great words and story though. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, deVine one! *G* (I should have added... can't dance worth diddly! LOL) Lor: OK, so my hair isn't gray... just a teensy exaggeration? LOL. But my sister took some pictures this weekend to send to sweet Toe... and the rest, unfortunately, is all too accurate! *G* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Can't speak for the outside, Suthern, but you seem to be a hell of a gal on the inside. That counts. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Balladeer....She is quite a gal on the outside too.....and though I haven't been "inside" of her yet....I think that's probably pretty good also....LOL.....Oh, wait, you mean her heart and mind don't ya?....Ummmm....never mind....that's obvious! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Balladeer: Thank you, kind sir! Toerag: So what are you waiting for... an engraved invitation? ROFL! SMOOCH, sweetie... and thanks! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Laughs :: And years later, this lady is simply more beautiful! Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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