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DEADLY DREAMS! (feedback welcomed)
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DeadlyMoonspell New Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 6lansdowne,pa usa |
My eyes are gathering, I can't stand the pleasure I feel I don't believe in love, cause I know it's just a raptured feeling The sky is falling down, and I am just flying My soul has been drowned, can't you see - I'm dying ! Darkest Dreamz |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh dear person...you should believe in love - just believe it's hard to find....it is there...a precious jewel on the bottom of a deep dark ocean, but it is there....Raptured feelings are what makes the world go round, by the way....Very intense little piece you have here ! Loved it.... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
I agree with poet...You do have a searing piece here..Well done..  ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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DarkChiild Junior Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 18 |
I liked your poem, and I agree to some extent... But love exists, but love hurts. But sometimes, just sometimes, it's really worth it no matter how it ends. ------------------ Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first. --DarkChiild-- |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's always worth it..... |
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