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thoughts before a phone call
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spence New Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 1lake jackson, tx, usa |
thoughts before a phone call instants drawn into moments drawn into eternity— timelessness seems the essence of my time with you I can be true weak strong safe centered challenged Can you read my poetry, love? my love, oh love, sweet love dying living breathing STOPPED will you dare the slow prose the words visions of heart soul Where will you be tomorrow? love, fool’s companion, shall keep its nest it likes its home my love, traveling far off horizons still searching the aching sweetness bitterness of LIFE Will you come back, love? of course, i am love’s bastard slave, apprentice, prodigy even it will croon in my soul and stoke the embers always she wanders… The embers rest, warm. eternity fades into moments fade into instants— They will wait. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
this looks like good free verse to me...Welcome spence  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim... stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving...Master...chat? ...apart...plain...vice...shameless self promotion |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really great work. I find that often the best poetry can be that which draws a reader into a maze of concept. This is certainly a great example of that! |
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