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la hac' awwni
Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44
Euless, Tx, 76039

0 posted 1999-08-02 02:41 PM


I am not a fightin' man
My Love
but this much is clear to me.
You
are worth fightin' for.
You must know by now
of my strong intentions
concernin' you.
Of your exquisite beauty
and spirit,
of oneness and singleness
of mind.
You have possessed me
from the start.
At the Rising of the Sun each
day, my strength is renewed in you,
at night I am lost, a depravity
has me...wanting.
My Burning Desire
is to know you fully,
and I cannot find the words
anymore
to express them.
May this page Burn
with intense heat as what is
inside of me for you.
I wish to snap these chains
that hold me back.
I would fight the very demons
of hell
if need be
(the power is mine)
for just one word from your
lips
and cut off every living man
for a lock of your
hair...
to see with my own eyes
your purest form...
to hold your hand
I would give away my
freedom
to be your slave...
words not taken lightly
to bow before any man...
or woman.
Aye
that is my oath to You.


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Gentle Soul
Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
1 posted 1999-08-02 03:02 PM


this is good.. captivating, and sweet... sounds like you really love this person..

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