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Open Poetry #1

Entropy-free verse

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-01 07:59 AM

In what myriad ways
does Entropy manifest
the loss of life,
death of love,
and how often
can the transcendant,
puerile wisdom
of unspoken words
truly be heard?

Nothing
is truly enduring
past the first spark of creation
which lights the way
inexorably
to the
extinguishing
of itself.

Celestial luminaries themselves
pass into decay
yet are reborn again
as the ashes
which coat the tongues
of inconstant lovers
as they speak
honeyed lies of love.

Entropy,
in the end,
is the uncaring lord
of all uncreation
as the universe
slides into
gyrations
of sweet oblivion.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

leelew
Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

1 posted 1999-08-01 09:27 AM

While it's true nothing is forever,it's also true what goes around comes around.A circle of life.Very well done dear Brother!

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"There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart"

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-01 12:38 PM

Yes, nothing here on earth will last forever, but forever you can be. But God is merciful and very caring. Good job!

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-08-02 02:50 PM

I like this DE... very true

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