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Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
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0 posted 1999-08-01 09:08 PM


Stargazing©1999 Genea Parker

I’ve walked a lonely path
Looking to the stars,
Dreaming dreams, wishing,
And guided by my heart.
Ignoring the many choices
Others had made for me.
Believing in only myself
And my personal destiny.

My journey now has ended
Stars have begun to grow dim.
It’s nothing that I’ve done,
It’s all because of him.
He led me along a path
I did not think to look back.
I found out much too late
It had all been an act.
I believed all his lies
Deceptions, untruths
Not because I had to,
But because I needed to.

I gaze up at the stars now
And the creamy Milky Way
Hoping to regain myself
And love again one day.

© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 124

1 posted 1999-08-01 09:23 PM


Beatiful poem! I hope that you find someone who will treat you with love and respect.
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-08-02 02:34 AM


WOW!
Now that, is what I believe poetry is about. It struck a string in my heart.

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-08-02 08:30 AM


at times, we all love to hear those "sweet little lies" i think
Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
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4 posted 1999-08-02 02:05 PM


CSwtThng......this was not about me, but thanks for the concern anyway. Got this idea after watching one of those Lifetime movies!

Christopher...glad u could relate to it.

elvira...oh yes we do!

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