Open Poetry #1 |
Dare Me Not (Feedback..good? bad? ugly?) |
Abdul Lateef New Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 9Centrevill, Va. ,USA |
Contrived imagination derives From men of limited ingenuity. Dare not me of impunity, And Dare not a man who transcends The circles of time. Essence of creativity derives From the heart and hand And stands beyond the ancient Ideaology of broken genious, As the seamstress stitches art From the stream of consciousness, Not from patterns obvious To the naked eye of spectators Who murder art through observation, Errant attempts to scrutinize Leaves the ultimate prize untouched So Dare not the one who holds no crutch! [This message has been edited by Abdul Lateef (edited 08-01-99).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Interesting viewpoint on creativity, but the reading is a tad marred from the misspellings. I think it would be prudent to spell check this poem, and edit it, which can be done by clicking on the little icon to the far right. If you hold your mouse over it, it will give you a description of what it does. Alicat |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gets out her dictionary....hmmmm. I actually kind of liked this one after I figured out what you were trying to say. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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