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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-08-01 04:00 AM


In you I have confided, in you I trust,
You have helped me in so many ways.
You have been there for me so I would not bust,
You are dear to me; it’s not a phase.

You were always there when I need you most
Giving me advice, I thank you dear
Gave me a shoulder to lean on, not to boast
Made me feel good, my life you did steer

You are my big brother see? And you I love
A special place you hold in my heart
And for you, Nightly I do thank God above
In spirit, I hope we never part

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£


© Copyright 1999 Gentle Soul - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-01 04:05 AM


Gentle Soul, this more tribute than I deserve, but I thank you for it.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-08-01 04:06 AM


I think you got your words backwards.. you deserve more tribute ;-) hehe.. but couldnt put it all in words *hugs*

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£


leelew
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since 1999-07-10
Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa
3 posted 1999-08-01 04:28 AM


Well said Angel...now can we beat some sense into him??? Love you both!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-08-01 05:19 PM


This was great. How humble he is! That's a good thing! God Bless ya both!
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