Open Poetry #1 |
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I Love You |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You hold me tightly in your arms. You take my fears away. You wrap me up in all your charms. You know just what to say. I fall in to your maddening ways that make me want you more. I know you’ll love me all my days and then forever more. If only I could kiss the eyes that peer in to my soul, the world, then, I would not despise and might I then be whole? So far away you are from me... I long for your sweet touch. Always, forever, presently, I love you very much. ©1999 ~onevoice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Oh....I loved this! Thank-You for writting such a lovely poem! ------------------ "There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart" |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis truly a wonder you have created, and yet, 'tis no wonder at all that such lovely words do come from a Lady graced with Woman's most provocative charms. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-01-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you leelew, for your praise! I does not go unappreciated! Thank you, dear Dream, for your mighty words of confidense! ![]() ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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