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Open Poetry #1

I Love You

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-08-01 09:26 AM

You hold me tightly in your arms.
You take my fears away.
You wrap me up in all your charms.
You know just what to say.

I fall in to your maddening ways
that make me want you more.
I know you’ll love me all my days
and then forever more.

If only I could kiss the eyes
that peer in to my soul,
the world, then, I would not despise
and might I then be whole?

So far away you are from me...
I long for your sweet touch.
Always, forever, presently,
I love you very much.

©1999 ~onevoice~

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

leelew
Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

1 posted 1999-08-01 09:34 AM

Oh....I loved this! Thank-You for writting such a lovely poem!

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"There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart"

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-08-01 09:41 AM

'Tis truly a wonder you have created, and yet, 'tis no wonder at all that such lovely words do come from a Lady graced with Woman's most provocative charms.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-01-99).]

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

3 posted 1999-08-01 11:24 AM

Thank you leelew, for your praise! I does not go unappreciated!

Thank you, dear Dream, for your mighty words of confidense!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-08-01 08:14 PM

Beautifully written, thanks for sharing

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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